Anyway, this is for a commission that I'm working on.
- Make the grandma the grandma and not just "old"
- Make the baby a tender slumbering baby and not just an unrecognizable blob
- Grandma's sweater is in the middle, this can't be a distraction
- Do something with that upper right corner (in the reference it's a few branches from a tree, but they would look odd if included - especially as I don't want to draw the Christmas pattern on the lady's sweater.)
- Hopefully I've caught wisdom there in Grandma's chin and not just age.
- The baby blob needs work, better values and stronger lines
- I'm hoping if I pump up the lines in the profiles, the sweater will fade in significance
- Hopefully a dark to light blur will do the trick in that upper right corner